Moriah Leila

While I agree with Wilder's statement about it being hard to write something you have no personal experience with, I disagree with experimenting or even hanging out with people who ...

This story is for Silversun's contest. I used photo #4. Elise stood before the full-length mirror, assessing her appearance. While she had always expected to get married, the fact that ...

I watched Mickey Mouse Clubhouse for five hours today.

8/10, McFly reminds me of Back to the Future. I've seen all three of those movies like 15 times!

Actually I have a job, and I'm kind of trying to get rid of it. TUBM has little to no patience.

Banned for being located on a pirate ship

Okay, so there were two things I almost immediately noticed about this story. First, it is really long. Consider breaking your chapters into smaller parts so that they are not ...

Corrections are in red. “N-no…. please… don’t… I need to put dinner on the t-table for my fa-family.” My grip on the knife tightened. “Hand it over, peasant!” I barked, ...

Corrections are in red. But you probably figured that out. Having noticed my father's markedly better spirits I decided to tell him my news. His face lit up and a ...

Corrections are in red. ''You ought to have been more careful Anetke. This is hardly the time to lose a finger,'' she said teasingly before turning back to clean up ...

So for the most part, everyone has covered what I was going to say. (i.e. New paragraphs start everytime someone new starts talking.) I thought it strange that even though ...

You know you're a writer when you get a great idea for a story and you grab whatever available surface to write the idea down before you forget. Doesn't matter ...

Veronica would probably check in her closet and under the bed to make sure that the robber wasn't still lurking around. Then she'd break down and cry, not because she ...

Well you said critique harshly, and so I shall. Or at least I will attempt to. And hopefully I don't overdo it. Either way, you'll be getting a critique from ...

Ok, so I have just three things that I want to cover, some of which has been addressed. But I wanted to be a little more in depth. 1. A ...